Blog entery #7

the thing i need to inprove is correct my grammer, point out my main theise would be about in each article. the challanges i face in this  class is that understanding the process of revising my own work and where should i lay out my own essay.

blog entery #6

Plato believe that what they see is what they think is true. They are learning it from what the shadows is presenting them. They study it as an experience so when the times comes for them to be out of the cave  they already know what they learned from it as an experience. But once you see the reality u feel the reality on your finger tips. You see the truth right in front of your eyes. Once see of wat you learned you share information they believe that

Blog Entry 5: "Allegory of the Cave"

Plato believe that what they see is what they think is true. They are learning it from what the shadows is presenting them. They study it as an experience so when the times comes for them to be out of the cave  they already know what they learned from it as an experience. But once you see the reality u feel the reality on your finger tips. You see the truth right in front of your eyes. Once see of wat you learned you share information they believe that

blog entery # 4: "hype"

Advertisements are all over the place from television to the drive through the countryside.  Advertisement has become an increase to society from day time till you go to sleep. In article "Hype" by Kalle Lasn, describe how the author gets tired of seeing advertisements. I disagree with the author; I believe that advisements can be prevalent and influence to the American society.

 An advertisement is a public promotion of some product or service that persuades the public to buy or know some information. There is estimation about "12 billion display ads, 3 million radio commercials, and more than 200,000 TV commercials advertising". It grabs your attention approximately three thousand message per day. You can find an advertisement by using the internet, watching television and even the outdoors. In the article, Lasn mention there is an increase in commercial advertising has happened so steadily and relentlessly that we, society, don't pay any mind to its effects. Anywhere in America you would see or find an advertisement.
           Advertisement can be poisonous and beneficial. Society can be influence from an advertisement to buy the product which it can be useful for them or have it in style. Seeing advertisement makes the person replace or "upgrade" their own item to something that they seem it way better. For example, I have an earphone but once I saw an advertisement of Dr. Dre headphones influenced me to buy those headphones. The reason that went on my mind was it’s in style and makes the songs (music) more realistic. When a person sees or listen to an advertisement that is catchy, it would make a person want the item.  Kalle Lasn said “I often used to hear Beethoven's Ninth Symphony play in my head. Now I hear that kid singing the Oscar Meyer Wiener song.
            Across America, advertisement can be influence and predominated in society. It may be poisonous or beneficial to observe and/or listen to an advertisement.

Entry 3: Summarizing "Hype

The article "Hype" by Kalle Lasn, Advertisement can be mostly prevalent and toxic. it can bee in the most usual places such as : buses, billboards, stadium, classroom,  from the drive through in the countryside 

Blog 2: Reflecting on Annotation

1.       Annotation is taken notes. There are three steps before doing annotation for a passage. The first thing you would have to do is read the passage. Second you would re-read the passage again. Last you annotate your ideas of the reading. The reason you do annotation is to develop the process of what you are reading.

During your annotation you look for this three ideas

·         The important ideas  

·         Thesis or claim

·         Words you need to look up

2.       Annotation for “Is Goggle Making US Stupid” is that once you Google the information you would easily forget what you are learning. Almost every person skims thru the article and don’t take the time to understand and process fully the information. Within my group they particle agree and disagree with the article. Some believe that goggle is making us smart. The reason they believe that, “is because the information we don’t know we can look it up based on Google.”

3.       I learned that annotation is important to your reading because it would help you understand the article. When you done with the annotating the article it would give you ideas on what to write on your essay.

4.       Annotating the article it would give you ideas on what to write on your essay.

Blog 1 "Hype"

           Advertisement are all over the place from television to the drive through the countryside.  Advertisement has became an increase to society from day time till you sleep. The article "Hype" by Kalle Lasn, describe how the author gets tired of seeing advertisement. How an advertisement can be prevalent and influence American society? 
           An advertisement is a public promotion of some product or service, that persuade the public to buy or know some information. There is an estimation about "12 billion display ads, 3 million radio commercials, and more than 200,000 TV commercials advertising". It grab your attention approximately three thousand message per day.   In the article, Lasn mention there is an increase in commercial advertising has happened so steadily and relentlessly that we, society, don't pay any mind to its effects. Anywhere in America you  would see or find an advertisement.
           Advertisement can be  poisonous or beneficial. Society can be influence from an advertisement to buy the product which it can be useful for them  or have it in style. Seeing advertisement makes the person replace or "upgrade" there own item to something that they seem it way better. For example, I have an earphone but once I saw an advertisement of Dr. Dre headphones influenced me  to buy those headphones. The reason that went on my mind was  it's in style and makes the songs (music) more realistic. When a person sees or listen to an advertisement that is catchy, it would make a person want the item.  Kalle Lasn said " I often used to hear Beethoven's Ninth Symphony play in my head. Now I hear that kid singing the Oscar Meyer Wiener song.
            Across America, advertisement can be influence and predominated in society. It may be poisonous or beneficial too observe and/or listen to an advertisement.